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This is the Last...//Corrupted//Just start//Louder [Drabbles] 
21st-May-2008 11:26 am
uru drama
Title: This is the last...//Corrupted//Just start//Louder
Author: outori
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ruki x Uruha
Genre: Drabble.
Warnings: Not beta-read.
Disclaimer: Not owning anyone in the drabbles, only the drabbles
Synopsis: Not really needed for a drabble ne, but just in case you want to skip angst ~ the first one is angsty, the rest smutty.
Author’s notes: So. I hate drabbles. ... No, not hate but I can't write them. That's why I tried. Spontaneously. While sitting in a lecture XD. The second one followed later, at home, the the third and fourth again, during a lecture. I still hate them xD

They are independent drabbles and don't really have anything to do with each other ~ apart from the last two ~

It should be exactly 100 words for each of them apart from Just Start ~ I didn't count the voiced sounds as words, nor did I count Gods as one XD


This is the last one.

Say my name, now, pronounce it the way you always do... roll it over your tongue, spill it from those lips, say my name…

Before those eyes are closing, say it… just one time. Please. My eyes, they turn lackluster with pain… they are, aren’t they… Please just say my name, if I can’t see your beautiful face anymore because it’s so hard, so hard keeping my eyes open… just say it… Can I feel your breath? Or is it an illusion? Can’t feel your touch. Pain numbed me.

This is the last.

Good bye.


Bodies. They’re so easily corrupted.

Right now, his body was being corrupted by the surging lust that filled his veins and made them throb hard from under his skin.

He should have known that agreeing on working out together with Uruha and Aoi was a bad idea. Seeing Uruha’s body drenched in salty, tasty sweat, less clothed than usual, was one thing. The other was hearing him groan whenever his body seemed to reach a new limit.

Ruki bit his lip, stopped moving. Somehow, Uruha noticed and looked up. Smirked. No more but a whisper.

“Have me.”

[Uruha POV]

You’re so hot, baby. Gods. Never stop moving. Touch me. Just like that. Mmmmh~ rub your oiled hands down my chest, ohhh your scent, mixed up with the oil’s… driving me insane.

Can’t see you, blindfolded with your tie, tied down with your belts, goddsdammit, your body’s so hot on mine, your tongue licking over my neck that way, your mouth sucking at my Adam’s Apple, those warm hands running over my stomach… lick up the sweat running down my temples, nnnngh, give it to me, I’ll be your slut, your whore, I’ll moan as much as you want me to…


… start…

… thrusting.

[Ruki POV]

The view of your naked thighs, rubbing against each other makes me have a… hard time on stage. I want to put my hand between them. Touch you… run it up between your legs, have you moan at the touch.

Now that I have you where I wanted you all along, I revel in the way you toss and turn when I ravish your navel with my tongue, groaning against your skin while my hands grab your sides, massage them.

‘You want to be my whore?’, licking up your chest, rolling against your hardened nipple.


Then start moaning.



Well, I still hate drabbles XD I mean, writing them. But at least I managed to do so haha~

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21st-May-2008 12:18 pm (UTC)
......still heartbreaking.
21st-May-2008 06:29 pm (UTC)
=D ... *beaming because you're there, then nods softly*
Mmm... somewhat, ne...

<3 ^___^ *snuggle*
22nd-May-2008 09:28 pm (UTC)
Oooooh hot and delicious....for drabble. *__*
22nd-May-2008 09:33 pm (UTC)

For drabbles, lol, yeah. It's like seeing a delicious cake on a table, all presented just for you, and then you start stretching out your hands, driveling already, and then notice that someone chained you up and you don't even get close enough

26th-May-2008 06:49 pm (UTC)
I'm speechless.

The first one was sad...

But the other three... *hides her nosebleed*
After having read those and lunachaos's new one-shot, I'll be having dirty dreams XDDD
26th-May-2008 06:58 pm (UTC)
hehehehe... the oneshot she wrote for me? xDDDDDDDD

Gods. I still have to read it hahaha ~

I love your Icon ^ ^ My otp ♥
And you really don't have to hide your nosebleed ^ ^... not from me anyway hahaha.

^ ^ Thank you for your comment <33
26th-May-2008 07:02 pm (UTC)
I think it is the one she wrote for you. Not sure O__o

My OTP too 8DDD
Eh. You're a member of ruru_heart, aren't you? could you post it there too? *admin desu* XDD
26th-May-2008 07:08 pm (UTC)
The last one... hai ^ ^ I haven't read it so I can't say what it's about XD Just that it's... smutty XD

Ohhhh my dear. ^ ^ I already did ne xP
26th-May-2008 07:12 pm (UTC)
I knoowww. *__* HOMG very,very,VERY smutty.

YOu already did?
...ohh. I looked there ten minutes ago or so O__o
26th-May-2008 07:28 pm (UTC)
Awww... Doesn't matter. ^ ^ I x posted it ... in a lot of places. ^ ^""""

*spammer* ... *sigh*

26th-May-2008 07:05 pm (UTC)
Wow you're a great writer too there!!!
It's lovely.
Though in the beginning, I thought someone was dying XD haha man I got it wrong ne XD
But this was very beautiful and I guess you're making me love uruki more ;D<3
26th-May-2008 07:13 pm (UTC)
Awwwwww hahahahah! DAMN I love comments like those, especially from writers that I know are great xP

*sighs* *beams* Ahh you know. Maybe you should read Honey Lips II when you have time. It's a proper fic, no drabblish ... drabbley drabbles. (And my first non-angsty one =-= ... )

Damn... making people love Uruki is my ultimate goal... well. Not really ^ ^ More... appreciate the beauty in their relationship/s, I'd say. [I wouldn't want to be flooded with Uruki either...]

Hmmm well... you weren't wrong about the first one. ^ ^ They don't really follow each other. (apart from the last 2) Maybe I should mention that
26th-May-2008 08:56 pm (UTC)
Ah Lol I'm glad haha^^ Awww :)

Well yeah i could read that one! But is that a sequel? Maybe I should read the first one first XD
But okie!! I will if I remember :DDD

Haha you don't like any other pairings? ^^ Though Uruki is love <333 But my favorite is still RukixKai ^^
Yes, its beautiful :D

Oh okay :) Yeah I thought that after I had comment that maybe they didn't follow each other XD
They were great though!!! :D
26th-May-2008 09:19 pm (UTC)

No, it's not a sequel. It's a one shot. (I just have my ways with calling things 'II'... usually when I had the idea and wrote something else at first... my first fanfic (UruXAoi xD) is called Droplets II as well. No sequel though ^ ^ It's all safe to read, hehe.

No, not that I don't like any others. I just like that one the most. ^ ^

Thaaaank you <3333 ^____^
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27th-May-2008 05:34 am (UTC)
Haha, deshou? I find the shortness of drabbles so damn restricting. I'm always like "wannnnt to write onnnGAH" , so usually I never get to write drabbles... even the try turns into something... longer xD

Apart from this time.

Thanks for commenting ^.^
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29th-May-2008 12:08 am (UTC)
Thanks a lot ;33

... Very smexy DP as well heh
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29th-May-2008 03:25 pm (UTC)

DisplayPicture//Icon xD
OMGS... and that one is just to die for x333 So cute x333333

... can't stop watching it XDDDD LOL I'm still staring and beaming hehehe
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30th-May-2008 04:57 am (UTC)
Ohhhh your Aoi? x3 Are you an Uruha, then? *^__^*
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30th-May-2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha... you know... Not at all (*^_____^*) erm. I was asking because I got that feeling x3

... I'm one too. *beams* ... With my Ruki x3333

*stretches out an Uruha hand to a sort of reflection* x333

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1st-Jun-2008 12:59 am (UTC)
Nyuuurr x33

*touches yours* .... *notices it's an Uruha hand and feels a magic ZING* ... xDDDD
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1st-Jun-2008 02:56 pm (UTC)
Awww hahaha... Are we? xD
Well you know x3 Dorky Uruha's are LOOVEEEEE ... and simply irresistable x3
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1st-Jun-2008 03:02 pm (UTC)
What am I to say to that... I'd love to be dorky all day long sometimes. x3
Makes life so much easier... or gives that impression at least ^ ^
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1st-Jun-2008 03:34 pm (UTC)
naaaa why are we all so depri deep down Y___Y

*jumps up and down and then at you x3* Uru dorks for world championshippppp x333333 (We should win, with our DOUBLE Uruness xp
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1st-Jun-2008 03:39 pm (UTC)
Maybe cause we're all just sensitive souls and well... that music just stirs it up the more it heals at the same time... ... at least I feel like that sometimes. <3

Nnnnhai... where are you from? Merika?

I'm sure two Urus would get along too well x3... (wait... maybe they'd stare at each other the whole time XD LOL! And poke... "Are you...?" "Yes I am" "But I thought I was..." x3 *touches to see if real* ... xD
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1st-Jun-2008 04:00 pm (UTC)
^.^ That and much more, probably

... Mitten? xD ... ermm... You can't make it harder/easier eh? xD Florida? LOL... At least that's the only state that comes to my mind that would be shaped somewhere close to a mitten lol

x3 A fr... no. My Ruki once told me about an UruXUru fic.... O_O *wants to read* But nnn... maybe just a tad too hot? oO *still wants to read*
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1st-Jun-2008 04:44 pm (UTC)
Ooooyyy okay xp I should remember that now though. Shaped like... *blinks* ... *gets terribly distracted* uhhhh... *stares* shaped like... like... like... like... a ... what was I talking about? ... shaped like... a vixen .. leather... laces... nn... vi...xen... nnghh...

*rapidly shakes head* Oooohhh what just happened? O_o *blinks* ... *for some reason doesn't look at your icon anymore x3*

Yeah, it's AU, as far as I know it starts as UruX?? (Saki? lol. Don't remember XD), and then hmmm... there's something about him (Uru), going to some cellar, or vault, and there he meets his dark side. x33 ... It sounds so dark and... irresistable, knowing that they'll have something going on. Dark and Light. ♥
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2nd-Jun-2008 05:32 am (UTC)
Nnnn just a tad x3 ... You have me stare at that icon again xD It's too cute lol

I think finding it wouldn't be so much of a problem... (though she'd prolly have to go through 101 different stories xD) erm... but as far as I remember, she told me it was in German oO

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2nd-Jun-2008 06:53 pm (UTC)
*laughs* Ne, I don't mind staring at it. Or else I wouldn't do it xD
... But I guess no matter what Uru icon you put there, I always might find reasons to stare *___*

=___= Gomen.
31st-Jul-2008 10:40 pm (UTC)
This has to be the sixth time I read these since you posted them.

lol Like the first five times, it's difficult for me to come up with anything coherent to say. The rhythm, the effectiveness of those sentences trigger a visceral response in me, and I'm having troubles putting it into words. : makes face :

The first two are my favorites. I also have to tell you that the last sentence of the second one made me feel weak in the knees. It completely took me off-guard. That was freaky and terrific at the same time.

Thank you for writing these.
31st-Jul-2008 11:57 pm (UTC)
Oh... wow. ^ ^" I'm always kind of dumbfound when I get unexpected comments on fics... especially when they're like this.

It's flattering and an honour to hear that such little things, so few words, can do things to people. I tend to write rather long and detailed, drabbles really are not anywhere close to what I could call 'my strength'. Or so I thought.

Your comment seems rather coherent to ~me~. I tend to be one to write rather very incoherent comments myself, so ...o-o

And I very much love your comment. It's little things like these that make one sit down and write more, ne. trigger a visceral response, I loved that. s well as you going weak in your knees.

Your comment , your reactions, caught me off-guard. ^ ^ Don't hesitate with commenting - I rather like what you call 'incoherent'

Thank you for that.
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