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[poem] Tϕuϛӈ Ψθu ԃ϶ἐϸ wiђin 
4th-Feb-2008 12:57 am
Mao eye
So well. Finally I was able to write another poem. I know I just posted one, but I thought yeah why not post them both. I wrote the other one a few weeks back. This one is from today.


ζϕὖϛӈ Ψθμ ԃ϶ἐϸ ϖΐђῐῃ

(03. February 2008)

I want to touch you deep within
Without a touch, where do I begin
With words that o will never reach
How feebly can I fix that breach

Cherry-blossoms tumble down
Surround me like an evening gown
Stick to tears that haven’t dried
And hide the hints of that I cried

I put my palms to my dewy face
Trace the tears and seek the place
where once I saw you far ahead
Find only flowers, withered, dead.

Wrinkled fingers around my neck
Tips of digits find the cracks
Scratch and rip and tear away
what you will never touch or flay.

Please hurt me, scar me, claw me, please
I want to find a flaw, increase
the pain the ache the grief the twinge
Just leave me broken, hurt and cringed.

I need the touch I’ll never feel
Found a love that makes me reel
Both combined rip out my heart
And scorch my soul, tear it apart.

I try to find one thing disliked
But every time I find I’m psyched
And love you more with every word
You put into my ears un-heard.

And all that ever reaches out from me
Are ghostly thoughts that cannot see
They’ll never touch the truth, your heart
Instead to me return the dismal darts.

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4th-Feb-2008 12:18 am (UTC)
I really like that poem- :)

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4th-Feb-2008 12:19 am (UTC)
Thank you~
4th-Feb-2008 12:57 am (UTC)
Wow! Awesome!
4th-Feb-2008 06:09 am (UTC)
<33 Arigatou~

I like your banana icon, haha
4th-Feb-2008 06:45 pm (UTC)
This poem would fit beautifully as lyrics to rock song. Hard but with a soft edge...って感じ ♪(/°°)/ ̄ハィ♪
4th-Feb-2008 06:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you ^^

Maybe I should sell my lyrics one day >_>
Be a professional songwriter lol
19th-Apr-2008 07:00 am (UTC) - ohhh ...
無名〜One with no name
so wonderful and touching ... not so dark as your poems used to be some years ago! This one definitely needs some Yuki-voice, wouldn't that be great *sighs from deep within*
19th-Apr-2008 03:32 pm (UTC) - Re: ohhh ...
^__^ Yuuki mmmm... maybe.

Thank you <3 It might not be as dark, but there are others I've written lately, that aren't... that light... Most of them are posted here anyway. Though no... that's not entirely true. I tend to post some, though. If you feel like snooping around, either go on the tag 'archive' [tags are the list of keywords on the lower left corner of my journal], you'll get my poem and fanfic archive on there. Click them (on 'whisper/shout' e.g.) and you'll see the list with the links. ~ <3 *kiss*
28th-Dec-2009 06:20 pm (UTC)
Just re-read that and a couple of others before and after with the same, or a similar essence. Love reading 'old things'. It gives so much insight.
I had actually "forgotten" that I really wrote that much with this essence, many I never posted. What an inspiration この愛情. It leaves me slightly dumbfound, and touched, as I re-feel it. It makes me sight softly.
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